Poetry Writing Exercises 215: Friday 1st November

Here are your four poetry exercises for today. Time yourself for 15 minutes for each one, then either have a break or move on to the next one.

215 cap 732377You can do them in any order.

  1. Keywords: answer, engineer, keg, leisure, yes
  2. Random: nothing fancy
  3. Picture: what does this inspire?
  4. One-word prompt: home

Have fun, and if you would like to, do paste your writing in the comment boxes below so we can see how you got on! Remember though that it counts as being published so don’t post anything that you would want to submit elsewhere (where they require unpublished material).

See below for explanations of the prompts, they do vary…

  • Sentence starts = what it says on the tin. You can use it at the beginning of the poem or include it later, and being poetry it doesn’t have to be exact – just be inspired by it.
  • Keywords = the words have to appear in the poem but can be in any order and can be lengthened (e.g. clap to clapping).
  • Single-word prompt = sometimes all it takes is one word to spawn an idea. Sometimes it easy, sometimes hard but invariably fun.
  • Mixed bag = an object, a location, a colour.
  • Picture prompts = nothing other than a picture. What does it conjure up?
  • Title = The title for your piece.
  • Haiku poem= 5 syllables, 7 syllables, 5 syllables
  • Random = whatever takes my fancy!

Tips

  • Don’t forget your five senses: sight, sound, touch, taste, smell
  • Show don’t tell: if your character is angry, don’t tell us he is, have him thumping his fist on the table.
  • Colours: Include at least one colour in your story. It does add depth.
  • Use strong verbs and avoid adverbs: Have a character striding instead of walking confidently.
  • Only use repetition to emphasise.
  • When you’ve finished the first draft, read the story out loud. It’s surprising how many ‘mistakes’ leap out at you when you read out loud… assuming you have any of course!

Pictures courtesy of morguefile.com

I love to talk about writing so feel free to email me. I’ll be pasting these prompts in this blog’s Facebook Group so you may find some other comments there.

If you’d like to submit a poem for critique on this site, see Submissions. The other critique writing groups are:

Morgen’s Online Non-Fiction Writing Group

Morgen’s Online Novel Writing Group

Morgen’s Online Short Story Writing Group

Morgen’s Online Script Writing Group

Thank you for reading this and we look forward to your comments.

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2 responses to “Poetry Writing Exercises 215: Friday 1st November

  1. Exercise 215 :Random: Nothing fancy

    THE CLUMSY MESSENGER

    The muse does ship quite faithfully
    the seeds that swell up fruitfully
    to bear new trees of poetry
    in soils of my mind.

    The spirit’s breath blows stirringly
    to bend the branches lovingly
    so ripened fruit fall daintily
    into my waiting palm.

    These fruits and nuts undoubtedly
    are rarely shared unflawlessly
    I trip and stumble clumsily
    to spill them on a page

    • Hi Pamela. I’m not normally a fan of adverbs (Stephen King bans them!) but I think they add to the rhythm of this poem so well that it feels like I’m on a ship, going with the back and forth with the sea. Lovely.

      I’ve mentioned this poem and your others for October / November on this blog’s Facebook group (which you’re welcome to join if you’re on FB). https://www.facebook.com/groups/388850977875934

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